Hello everyone,
I hope that you enjoyed our last excursion to QLD state library and QLD museum. Take a look at the beautiful photos that Lili and Yuki have taken on that day and then write a few short paragraphs about these photos. Your recount should consist of a topic, orientation (who, when, where, how etc), records of events and a coda or reorientation (optional). I'd like you to use at least 5 noun groups (adj+noun), 10 conjunctions and different simple past verbs (regular & irregular) in your recount.
Make sure to check your spelling before posting your comment to me.Good luck
Michael
Last Tuesday my classmates and my teacher went for a visit to QLD library,QLD meuseum and South Bank.They enjoyed alot there.I could not join them because I was late.When I arrived,they've already left.
ReplyDeleteIn the first photo there are all my classmates along with my teacher but one of them was deepika who is from another class.They all look very happy.
In the next photo all my gud friends and my teacher were in South Bank.When they got very tired and became hungry,they bought some food like my teacher's favourite sandwiches an coldrinks.
In the next photo my good friends were with the teacher in library where they studied some books and students got more information from our teacher.
The next photo is my favourite.its my teacher's photo who was reading book very seriously.
In the next photo they all had a groug photo and look in a very pleasant mood.
The next photo is in the South Bank in which everybody looks tired.
last photo where they were at the train station before going to excursion.It sounds me that they were waiting for me.
That was a very nice excursion.I wish I could be there.If I get a next chance to go for a visit with my friends,I'll never miss it.
Hi,Michael,I'm very happy to spent that time with you.
ReplyDeleteLast Tuesday,we had an excursion at The QLD Museum and The QLD State Library.It's worth to recall for everyone.
In the first photo,we had our lunch together in the southbank park,look!The foods were abundance,and everybody has a smile,we spend a good lunchtime.
In the second photo,4 beautiful ladys arronded our teacher-Michael at The QLD State Library,there were Misun,Yuki,Fariza,and ZiTing.They were discussing something,Maybe Michael was telling them some funny things.
In the third photo,Michael was reading at a area of The QLD State Library.It's looked very quietly.This photo has good colors,red wall,green plants out of the window,Michael dressed a white shirt,I can find some delight from this photo.
In the fourth photo,we were staying at a funny space.It's a design about the combination of table&chair,it's comfortable and practical,we were enjoyed sitting there.
In the fifth photo,We had a rest on the grassplot after lunch.We were enjoying the sunshine and the low-wind.Maybe someone were thinking about how to spent their afternoon, someone were thinking nothing,just enjoying.
By lily